Exquisite sentence

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Yesterday I started writing. I had some subjects I could write about and I choose the Black hole. In each sentence we had to have a Subject, Verb, Noun, and a adective. I choose my favourite sentence and coloured it in Blue. I had 8 sentences, I wrote as much as I could. My teacher wrote some Verbs and Nouns to help us if we couldn't think of anything to write for the Verb and Noun.

Here is my writing

The Black hole is a Big circle but there is no light so it's impossible to stand on top of it.